This is a simple demonstration of the old adage about tasting your wares. The brochure advertising grapes and their associated products gets hit twice, meaning the graphic designer and the editor were, ahem, a little graped? Error 1: "Suppliments" should be "Supplements." Error 2: The paragraph is missing an "and" to make it a legit sentence, or even coherent thought. For college drunkeness while creating an informational flyer, I award the White Fiberglass Monocle of Carousing.
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