Friday, September 16, 2011

Defending your poor grammar rights

This photo and subtitle was taken from the front page of the Army Knowledge Online website, commonly referred to as AKO. This is the official portal into Army email and information management, and is thus seen by millions daily. The error is in line 6, when a comma is inserted after "Onboard are," without establishing a list. The comma is a rogue agent. With a simple refresh click and a new photo appeared with a fully detained rogue agent, but not before the grammar police had enough for a formal military tribunal. However, for having the courage to defend grammar disasters everywhere, I award the special Mayor's 9/11 Shroud of Courage, so the writer may shroud himself and his typo.

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